What do you think? I think after rewriting it 40314902319 times they're at their best level They are bound to the Earth like trees Suffocating under the weight of an icy grave Reaching to be free, but only their limbs are seen Hoping that one day someone will see: They can't escape with lacerated wings The ocean surrounds me, covering everything Nothing will be clearly seen; confusion overwhelming No-one can save you, you're on your own, left to die Manipulating every bleeding heart you can find I can't escape with lacerated wings. Swarms of nets, waves of screams Entangle: your captive illusions and dreams The mask has be seared - The truth now they see The Liar - Vampiric Fiend; lowly thief And now they know you can't escape with Lacerated Wings There's reasons for your rejections: Your Heavy heart's transferred oppression The scars are too deep to pass the trials But you can find peace in your cage of empty spirals You Cannot Escape With Lacerated Wings
Oooo I like it!! Excellent job! It reminds me (this is a compliment!!) of older Evanescence lyrics like on their Origin CD. Is has the same depth IMO.
Thanks I actually do love that album; they're a big influence on me, they got me started in music ---------- Post added 24th Mar 2013 at 08:41 AM ---------- I'm not really in a band, but I do play guitar (not well), sing, write music, and I recently ordered a tin whistle, which I want to add to my music to sound more folk/Celtic. I do have my own project (I guess that's what you call it) called Illian, and I plan to make a demo for it, called Relics of Fear. I already know what songs are going to be in it, and all the lyrics are written. About one song is almost done out of the 5
Good rule of thumb for song writing, when you are tired of rewriting the lyrics you are done!!! lol! Good job though, I like it!