well im writing my first college essay. at first i was doing good, but now im on my final draft and i have to write more. But now my mind is blank and im very frustrated. Maybe you guys can help me a little. the topic is about prop 8. I had to chose one ad from 10 that the teacher posted. i chose this one... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CIL7PUl24hE .. so i have to write about it and i have to go into depth and stuff on what is said and done. I wrote all the obvious but i dont know what else. you guys will probably think of stuff i missed. it has to be 3-4 pages long and i have 2 only. i would really appreciate the help. thanks in advance
Perhaps give a list of what, specifically, you've already covered so everyone can better think of areas you can expand on/add in. Might be helpful.
Mention how children are used a lot of the time (give other examples) to coerce a viewer into doing something "for the children".