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Poem I wrote earlier ( Cold night)

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  1. Warmwood

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    Basically English not is my first language, so i used to write in another language so i tried to write in English, hope you enjoy it,
    Note" i play (write) without rules i just care about the Surrealist perceptions in my writing"


    COLD NIGHT

    The nights are moving away Escort the clouds, the noise and my dreams Leaving my tears

    dripping in the void of my pillow Just to say Hi!

    The pillow answer back my cheeks in calm scratchy touch
    : there are enough of your filthy Stoney tears.

    No one hear,

    -“Hush” that what the frozen window said,-


    No one hear, the crush of my breath.


    The dawn came…. came ... came

    All the lovely birds are dancing away
    And the sun trying to mount the sky
    Shoves the cold of the night
    To wake up my little soul from my deeps
    Until that….
    the dancing bird came
    and on window balconette
    did die…

    in that exact memento, life revels the penalty of living,
    you feel betrayed, sorrow and rage
    you jump from the edge of your bid to kill yourself or what is left from your dreams,




    No one hear…
    What the trees did say to the wind
    About what was seen under the roses skirt
    When they were blooming!

    That is another story and another night
    That could steal your warmth.
     
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    Lovely. :hearts: I like some of your imagery. :camera_with_flash: Thanks for sharing this.
     
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    Thank you very much, hope you enjoy it, this another one i wrote

    Trees
    And fingers sucha raceme of berries
    Stroll surreptitiously
    As geese sally a slender strand of water
    And i enumerate what left over of my dreams
    Leafs
    pinnace
    And blue lanterns
    Peaceful sail
    This is my heaven
    Rose
    And moon