my NEW song (please look at it)

ok so you made it here! YAY!
this is my new song, "Time & Dime"
uhm so what really inspired this song was when my ex and i would break up and i'd run from the arguements and i would give in when we did and this song was really me just like saying i'm gonna say what i have to say and express myself---------------- so my ex if you're out there looking at this... this song is for you



Time & Dime

I'm not running away
Oh no, not this time
This is the way
You broke me, mine
Away at my heart
Like I'm just worth a dime
I just wasn't worth your time

na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na
Dime Time, Dime Time
na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na
Time Dime, Time Dime

I'm not giving in
Oh no, not this time
I gave you way
Too many chances with
My love, my joy, my heart
You're not worth my time
You're just a little dime

na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na
Time Dime, Time Dime
na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na
Dime Time, Dime Time
no no, oh no

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did you like it?
let me know if you have any tips or any critic or any opinion at all im taking all the advice, critism, and words in to improve my music so please be honest.

 

I love this song. Is your dream to be a singer?

 

yes... but no

 

@glitter lucky i want to sing and i want to persue in it but i don't want poparatzie trying to bang down my door either but if i ever do get famous off of my music i don't want it to be my main job. i want to also have a different job just in case becoming famous doesn't work out yknow?

 

Thats a rlly cool song BUT song lyrics dont sound the greatest if you dont know the actual beat to it yknow? Like if you dont know which parts to stop at or is you say it fast. Genre is also a big thing. This song would be so different if it was indie or say rock, yknow? Great lyrics id just reccomend if youre gonna go full through with this you should think of those things and aprove on the lyrics if needed to fit the style. Amazing though its really cool that youre able to make lyrics. Do you already like fully make songs and release them on like spotify or youtube? If so you should send me the link bc id love to check out your songs.

 

Understandable.

 

yea i play ukulele and guitar so i do know how the beat would go and im thinking about releasing some of them on spotify later but idk rn because i'm in the middle of a lot with school and stuff so i don't know how to try to do everything yknow?

 

Yeah thats rlly cool! You should totally release em but save room for school and stuff yknow? Id love to follow you on spotify

 

yea

i gotta think about it first but i don't know but when i figure it out i will let you know!!!!!

 

You play string instruments? I play the flute. Not easy...you play it to the right and sideways and it's a woodwind but it doesn't have a reed, just a hole for the air.

 

yea my friend plays flute and said it's a hard instrument to play

 

indie/pop is what it is but im still working on the beat right now and im leaning more to indie and pop than anything else