You left me broken I gave you everything So you could focus on me, god damn I just want love Can't you see that's all I want? I want you to love me I want you in my life It just doesn't seem right I just wanted you to love me But you broke me into pieces Now i cannot breathe Because part of you Is part of me You left me stranded After all i gave you I got abandoned, oh well I just wanted you Couldn't you see that's all i want? I wanted you laying next to me I wanted you in my life It just didn't seem right You broke me everytime Now i won't be the same Because part of you Is part of me You left me damaged In spite of hope, You never loved me
I really love this part: "Now i cannot breathe Because part of you Is part of me" It has good flow, I also like the idea in this! My one tip is maybe read it out loud and see if the words flow into each other like the section I put above. REALLY GOOD THO!!!!
it's actually just a free speech type of thing yknow? no rhyming scheme no rules just me and my poetry/music yknow?
aww thanks a lot of people say my music is too sad and depressed but i find it hard to express myself with just plain words and writing it makes it easier to explain how i feel and what im going through yknow?
awwww is it really that catchy??? i wonder if i can post a video of me singing it?? maybe?? idk how to though if you can